Helping a friend.....

Hey everybody! One of my friends on NaNo, she asked me if I could help her with her stories. They are on TeenInk, and she would love it if you read it and tell her what you think. Here are the links:

http://www.teenink.com/fiction/romance/article/517158/M
http://teenink.com/fiction/realistic_fiction/article/517157/Silver-Lining-in-a-Dark-Cloud/
http://teenink.com/fiction/realistic_fiction/article/517178/Catty-Relationships/

Thank you for your help!